Now then, the challenge: Write a caption about one, or two, or three, or all four of them. Suppose the hot springs you're seeing here are completely normal. No magic rooms, no magic water, no magic doorways or towels or whatever. Also, as usual, suppose each of these four girls was male at some point, and changed by something at least a few minutes before coming to the spa (or whatever the establishment is).
Optimally they will have been changed at different times, and/or by different things, but that's more a recommendation than a requirement for this challenge.
-Muffinstud
ReplyDeleteThe redhead sighed contentedly and nudged the girl next to her with her foot. "So, what brings you here?"
The nudgee turned, brushing back some of her pink hair. "Um, a bus?"
Red groaned. "No, I mean here here. As in, why you're in the Ladies baths instead of next door."
Pink blushed. "I... Well, I am a woman, aren't I?"
Red rolled her eyes. "Sure, but you weren't always one. I doubt any of the women at this hotel were, what with the convention and all. So tell me your story already."
Pink kept blushing and sighed. "Local witch coven caught me raiding someone's panty drawer on a dare. How about you?"
Red nodded sagely. "Botched nanite surgery. Got a pretty penny from the malpractice suit."
"Wow, that's kind of lucky, if you ask me. You're rich, and you're still you, up here..." Pink tapped her forehead. "The witches made me really shy around men." She blushed even more. "And really attracted to them."
Red shook her head. "That sucks. But hey, if you ever want some girl-time, hit me up. I'll see if I can help you break out of your shell."
"You really mean it?" Pink gave her a hopeful look.
"Sure. You're hot, so if I hang around you, I might catch someone who isn't just looking for money, ya know?" Red grinned.
Pink blushed again, but smiled. "All right. Friends."
"Friends."
by: tg-me
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One day while walking home from school, Andrew, as usual, started peering through the local hot springs gate. It was a girls only hot spring, so he couldn't get in. It wasn't the girls in towels that he made him stare, it was the spring itself. He was the only son of a single mother, so he had alot of chores and house work. Since he was always busy, relaxing and unwinding at the hot spring was almost all he thought about! Little did he know, he was about to get his all access pass!
His mom, Leah, was driving to the store when she noticed him looking through the gate on the way. At first, she figured he had no respect, but when she took a closer look, she realized his face had a sad look on it. She then noticed a woman walking out of the spring and her way, so she figured she would see if she knew him, maybe find out why he was staring through the gate.
"Oh him?" the woman started. "Ya I know him, well sorta, he's pretty famous around the hot springs. Every day, around this time, there he is, staring through the gate. At first, we all thought he was perverted, but then when an employee talked to him, she found out the truth. Turns out, he just wanted to join us and relax in the hot spring! I feel kinda bad for him." "Why doesn't he just go in?" Leah asked. "I heard people ages 9-17 get in free." "Oh they do, but the spring has a strict girls only rule. Unless your a woman, you can't get in. Anyway, I better get home and make dinner for my family. With that the woman left. "This could be my chance!" Leah thought as she continued toward the mall.
She came home to him taking out the trash with the same depressed look she remembered. She greeted him as she walked in. "Hey honey, how was school?" He just said ok without even looking up at her. "I know all about how you wanna go to the hot spring!" She said as making him immediately look up at her. "You know you could've told me. There's nothing wrong with taking a break once and a while, especially when you work as hard as you do." "But I figured you work hard all day for both of us, if I were to complain and ask for a break when I felt tired..." Leah cut him off. " Your looking at it the wrong way, you deserve it more than anybody." "Even if you're right, I still can't go, it's girls only.
She then took out a green vile and gave it to him. "Before you do anything, I have to tell you something. I've been dating someone for about a year now and he purposed last week. He owns a few businesses and he's a nice guy so I said yes. But there's a problem, he already has a son and he wants one of each. So he gave me that vile to give to you, if you drink it... you'll become a girl." Andrew was surprised, he couldn't believe where his mom was going with this. "You want me to drink this a become a girl?!" "It'll be good for both of us, I'll be able to get married, his daughter is a member of the springs so you could have all the privilege's, and things will be so much easier for both of us! I'll help you get used to your new body and I'll give you the freedom to go to the springs everyday after school!" The offer sounded really good to him. He wouldn't have to work as much, and he could go to the spring everyday with member privileges! So he took the cork off the vile, stared at it for a bit, then finally downed it all at once.
by: tg-me
ReplyDelete(part 2) btw, I screwed in part 1, he had a daughter already and no son, but he wanted another daughter.
When the drink was all gone, he started feeling dizzy. He noticed the room getting bigger as he got slightly smaller, just before he past out on the floor. His hair grew, but just slightly. The hair on his body melted away as his skin became softer and smoother. His arms and legs got rounder, his torso, arms, and fingers shrunk, and his legs grew. His face shifted and became more feminine. His legs started pushing in-ward more and more, until something in between had to vanish to make room! Finally, 2 bumps appeared under his shirt and grew until they were a pair of modest breasts, finishing the changes.
She woke up about an hour later, drowning in the clothes that once fit her. Leah walked back in and helped her to her feet, but she nearly fell again under her new weight and figure! "How do you feel, sweetie?" Leah asked. "Different." was all she could say, and all she wanted to say after hearing her new voice! "I went to the store and bought you a new outfit, since your old clothes don't fit anymore. Hurry up and change so you can go to the springs before they close!" She smiled and nodded at the thought of the springs. She went up to her room and came back down in a pink tank-top, blue jean skirt, and suede boots (got the boots from a game my sister used to play). She ran off to the spring as fast as her slowly gaining balance could carry her!
When she got there, she quickly filled out the sign in sheet, stripped into a towel, and went in a nice roomy spring with two girls already in it. She still wasn't comfortable talking so she just tried ignoring them as she dipped her toe in. When she was in all the way, she felt great! The warm water was even better than she could have ever imagined! She sat back quietly for a while until another girl came over and put her feet in. She was a pretty girl with blond hair, yellowish eyes, and looked about a year or so older than her. She looked over and started talking to her. "Hey, haven't seen you around here. You new?" the girl said. She felt that she had to talk now. "Uh... ya. This is my first time here." "Cool. I'm a member here, so I come here a lot. I'm Page." Feeling more comfortable making a friend, she said. "I'm... Anna."
What Anna didn't know, was that Page was the daughter of Leah's fiance, so after about a month, her friend became her older sister! Page's dad did tell her about Andrew and the vile. But she didn't mind, in fact, she decided to help her get used to her new body and learn to be more feminine. Before, she was Andrew, a hard working, middle class boy with only a mother. Now, she's Anna, a wealthy girl who barely has to lift a finger, with a mother and father and even a sister. And the best part is that she isn't depressed anymore because she gets to go to the spring everyday!
THE END
There was one rule in this challenge I wasn't able to follow. Sorry whatevr89532